Hey, Noor
I can tell by your text that you are frustrated with your school, I think writing and e-mail to them is very smart of you if you want change, but I think you should change up your writing style just a little bit.
First of all, I think you should write with more respect, your school might want to give you school trips and fun activities but are unable to because of money trouble or something else.
Would you go up to someone you knew had trouble with money and beg them to buy stuff for you?
I do think schools should have school’s trips and they might be boring, but they are educational which is the main point of going to these trips.
You also use way to many exclamation marks which looks childish and they might just not look at your email because of childish looking behavior. If you clean up your writing and stop writing with slang and talk with more formal words they might take your application serious and take you to more trips!
-Marius
